Please help me! Thanks!?

Question: We have to write a poem about our locker and have it be personification.

This is What I have:

Bang! Bang!
All day, all I hear,
Everyone rushing about.

Ouch! Olivia,
Open only,
Once a day.

Rah Rah!
Go Penn State?
Who cares!

If she puts in,
Another Titanic magnet,
I’m going to sink like the ship.

This life,
This life as a locker,
Is no life for me.

Also,
I have to write a Personification poem about an emotion. I chose adoration. What do you think? Suggestions?

I saw adoration clearly.
She was short and wispy.
She turned and seems to glide.
I saw her pale skin and bright blue eyes.
And I heard her quote Shakespeare.
And I felt warm and fuzzy.

I saw adoration clearly.
She was tiny and thin.
She turned and she floated in mid air.
I saw her goldenrod hair flutter behind her.
And I heard her speak with a quite voice.
And I felt all tingly inside.

I saw adoration clearly.
She was small and cute.
She turned and walked with small steps.
I saw her cheeks flush with the intensity.
And I heard her sing a sweet melody.
And I felt good.